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Fluffy and Nice Omegaverse
Format: Kindle
ā¦ this would have made 5 stars but for 2 reasons.
A.) there were quite a few typos; misspelled words, missing quotations, āthe hisā mistakes, and various signs that maybe a proofread would do good.
B.) the writing was quite textbook. Late blooming omega is struggling with her new self, finds a absurdly wealthy pack of alphas, every thing is almost insta-love but she resists, then decides to love herself and let everyone be happy.
Rian was my favourite (obviously the authorās favourite too because he got the most page time) but I wish we could see more of his CEO side? He went to work maybe ONCE the entire time. Gray was supposed to be the āgrowly oneā but he turned out to be puppy dog. Lucas was a genius brainiac doctor - but also super alpha with an aggressive hindbrain with a breeding k*nk?? And then there was no actual ābreedingā??
Spice 3/5 - normally omegaverse books are super high on messy smut but this was tamer.
Romance 3/5 - insta-love that was then resisted because of personal hangupās
Plot 2/5 - weird paced head hopping, showing the same scene from different POVās that made me feel like it was 2 steps backward, 1 step forward.
Humour 4/5 - there were a dozen lines that genuinely made me chuckle out loud
Would have been five stars but the lack of proofreading and the predictable plot made me unable to get up to ADORED IT level - four stars is still and official ENJOYED IT, yāall. This isnāt a bad rating. The āClub Heatā has intriguing possibilities so Iām going to give the second one a shot.
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Reviewed in the United States on March 31, 2023
